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clara

4/10/2018

8 Comments

 
  The Lucky Bunny

It was a warm summer day and the bright yellow sun was glistening over the mountains, then a tiny bunny came out from behind a rock and started hopping around, exploring its surroundings.

Then the sun gleamed on the other side of the mountain and saw the bunny’s mother, but the sun thought that the mother getting to the baby bunny was hopeless.

There was a thin blade of grass in between them but not enough to get to the other side and then he also found a shiny pebble and decided to tie it to the grass to use a rope to swing across!

And they lived happily ever after.

By Clara

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8 Comments
siobhan
4/10/2018 08:20:10 am

* great story
*lots of adjectives
Wish:It didn't make sense at the end

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Grace link
4/10/2018 11:53:38 am

i don't think it made sense at the end. i think it needs a bit of fixing up and then it could be a great story. Also, i think u used to much of the word "then". WELL DONE!!!

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abbie
4/10/2018 09:46:17 am

Really good story
Very good verbs and adverbs
Maybe used more descriptive words

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Aoifeee D
4/10/2018 10:05:31 am

This story is amazing lots of great adjectives used! Well done x

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Caitlin
4/10/2018 10:31:32 am

Wow, Clara that was a great story,
*great vocabulary,
*good adjectives,
well done Clara.

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Obinna
4/10/2018 02:22:32 pm

Great story
Very interesting
Be a bit more descriptive

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CllumC
4/16/2018 07:01:31 am

Nice short story, a very sweet one at that. Some nice ideas and descriptions and I also loved the way you spoke as if the sun were alive and watching. Good job!
~ Team 100

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JH
4/20/2018 06:10:41 am

I think that the story had a lot of adjectives and was very interesting well done

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