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sophie g

1/10/2017

6 Comments

 
My Manic Day

I was in maths class, when the tornado sirens went off. From then on everything was manic.
Suddenly, the floor started to shake everything was falling around me, I was trapped.
After about fifteen minutes when everything was calm. I stumbled to my feet, I looked in front of me and behind. Which way? I didn’t know. I could hear people shouting but I didn’t know where they where, it was very dark, I was in big danger. I had to move fast.
I was scared and alone, I had to find someone, but where do I start?
By Sophie G

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6 Comments
Hayley
1/10/2017 09:20:53 am

star: well done sophie great punctuation and grammar
star: amazing ajectives
wish: NO WISHES because your story was so good

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Kacey
1/10/2017 10:39:13 am

Well done Sophie great job with your story I really liked the way you used the prompt in your story this week.

Star= I really like your story's headline.

Wish=maybe a few more sentence openers next time

Star=I liked what you based your story on this week.

Question=Did you find someone in the end?🤓

Kind regards
Kacey

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Hannah le
1/10/2017 10:43:25 am

Hi Sophie.
Your 100 word challenge was excellent and very creative.

Star. Great punctuation fantastic open sentences.

Wish. Maybe instead of saying about 15 minutes you could say around 15 minutes.

Star. Great speech and you up leveled some of your words.
Well done.

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jay
1/11/2017 05:52:40 am

well done
star: good adjectives
star:good grammer
wish:i don't think i have one
?: were you safe

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Sophie G
1/11/2017 05:55:17 am

Thanks, for all the wonderful comments.

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Anna
1/11/2017 01:04:15 pm

Hi Sophie

*** Really good punctuation***
***Excellent Adjectives***

Wish= No wish

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