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sahil

1/10/2017

6 Comments

 
                              The Maze
...I looked in front and behind. “Which way?” “Where was the finish line?” I said to myself in my head.  I need to get to the finish or else I wouldn’t come first place  and I'll be stuck here in this massive maze with my worst enemy, his name is Greg.
Well my teacher put us into groups of 2 for the school trip and unfortunately Greg was in my group. Right now I'm trying to solve this maze and get to the finish line and Ohh!  I think I hear loads of people screaming. That has got to be the finish line.

By Sahil. ​
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Rhys
1/10/2017 09:09:25 am

Nice story sahil very creative
I like the way you put everything in bold it really makes it stand out
but next time maybe use a few more adjectives and sentence openers
did you ever find finish line

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Shane
1/11/2017 08:06:43 am

***Great creativity***
***Great the way you used the prompt at the start***

WISH - I have no wish

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Sean
1/11/2017 08:20:31 am

* very good imagination
* I like the layout of the story
I have no wish or hope

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Nicolas
1/11/2017 11:00:20 am

*Great ending!
*I like it is in a maze.
My wish is that you should use commas.

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Finn
1/11/2017 12:20:01 pm

***I like the kind of cliffhanger at the end.
***I laughed at the fact that he was stuck with his enemy.
WISH:None

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Aoife
1/12/2017 08:34:43 am

Great story Sahil,
** Great ending,

NO WISH

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