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marcelina

1/10/2017

6 Comments

 
​            The Marshmallow

I was nibbling on my ‘Lays’ crisps, suddenly I turned my stuffed face, there I spotted a big fluffy marshmallow, grinning at my pale face, he asked me if I wanted to eat him up, I replied with a solid, “No,” because he looked so friendly. I stared at him with slight fear, but suddenly he started to run quite fast, away from me, I looked in the front and behind. Which way did he escape? I decided to search for him, I wasn’t a threat, but I was curious as this was the first time that a piece of food had ever spoken to me.

By Marcelina
6 Comments
sophie.f
1/10/2017 07:24:05 am

hi marcelina,
i thought your story was amazing, very different, but amazing. i loved he way you decided to use the prompt and i really enjoyed reading your story
sophie

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Aideen
1/10/2017 08:12:13 am

Wow Marcelina what a story. Vey creative and very good. I think it was kind you didn't eat the marshmallow. Great story this week. From Aideen 😎😋😆

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Aoife
1/11/2017 08:18:11 am

*** Great story this week***
***Very creative story this week***
Wish= none

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Catherine
1/11/2017 11:38:45 am

Star- Great imagination
Star- Good adjectives
Wish- Remember to put full stops instead of commas sometimes
Great story this week. Keep up the good work!

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Gaby
1/11/2017 11:54:28 pm

Hi Marcelina,
Loved the story.
Star:Very good imagination was put into that story.
Star:Very good adjectives.
Wish:none

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Rhys
1/18/2017 12:25:08 pm

Great story
Good adjectives
Next time make shorter sentences

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