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hannah lu

1/10/2017

5 Comments

 
​             In The Wild

I run. I run as fast as the wind and don’t stop until I make it. My shaking white paws stomping into the brown crunchy leaves as I run for my life. Constantly, I’m glancing back to see if the hungry fox is still chasing me through the deep dark woods. Nervously, I looked in front and behind. Which way was home? Finally, I hop into my warren and quickly turn around. There’s the fox. It’s large head stuck. It’s piercing blue eyes darting at me. It’s jaw snapping. And his teeth glaring as sharp as a knife. I was trapped.
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Ellen P
1/10/2017 10:05:19 am

Well done Hannah your story was AMAZING!
*I your creativity skills your bring something very different to the table every time I read your story.
*Your use of adjectives were great I could picture your story in my head as I was reading it.
*I loved your grammar and punctuation it really stood out to my.

-Ellen P

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Ellen L
1/10/2017 11:28:45 am

WOW, great description, I almost felt like I was in the story.

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Christopher
1/10/2017 03:00:23 pm

Wow, Hannah just when I thought you were at your best you come back and write a story even more creative and even more descriptive than before.
The sky is the limit for you.
The emotions in the story were powerful.
Keep it up,
Christopher.

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Carson B
1/11/2017 07:41:30 am

Very well done! It was very detailed for only 100 words!

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Mary
1/11/2017 08:55:28 am

Star=Your story is breath taking.
Wish=Keep up the good stories
Star=Great adjectives

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