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hayley

12/6/2016

16 Comments

 
Is this my teacher?
I walked into the classroom with my friend and to our surprise the class was alone. Our teacher wasn’t there. When we walked over I saw something round and green. Then I turned to my friend and she had this weird looking face on her. As I turned around it changed shape. When it stopped wriggling around it had the same body as my teacher. It pointed to the table at the back.
“Sit down, NOW.
We scurried over to our table and sat down. We looked at each other and said “Is this our teacher?”
By Hayley
16 Comments
Marcelina
12/6/2016 10:44:05 am

Well done Hayley! I really adore this story, I really liked your adjectives, I also loved the way that you made it a teacher! I laughed while reading this, well done for making me laugh! XDD

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Ellen
12/6/2016 12:36:32 pm

Well done Hayley I really liked your idea this week.
Star- Great adjectives and sentence openers.
Star-Great story line and grammar no words were out of place.
Wish- Maybe at the first sentence you could of used a sentence opener to make it sound more interesting.
Well done again on your great story Hayley I can't wait for next weeks.

-Ellen P

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Daniel
12/7/2016 07:50:23 am

*** great story and good adjectives

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Emily
12/7/2016 10:18:21 am

Hi Hayley, love your story. Keep up the good work.

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Eoin
12/7/2016 11:19:20 am

*** Something different than than the others well done!!!***

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Connie
12/7/2016 12:09:37 pm

Hey Hayley. ***I really liked the twist*** Well done

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Aoife M
12/7/2016 01:16:42 pm

Hi Hayley,
**great grammar
**interesting twist
Keep up the the good work!

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Kevin
12/7/2016 02:11:17 pm

Hey Hayley ***Great story and I loved all of your adjectives*** Keep up the good work.

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Lauren
12/8/2016 12:31:57 am

Hi Hayley,
***Great story
*** I really liked your adjectives
Good luck and well done
Lauren. C

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Dylan K
12/8/2016 12:11:32 pm

Hi Hayley,
Your story was amazing,
I loved the way you used adjectives and sentence openers.
Keep up the work !
Dylan K

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Robert
12/12/2016 06:33:45 am

Hi Hayley.
I liked your story.
You thought of shapeshifter as me.
Good work for your story you just did.
Mrs Boyces Class
~Robert

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Aoife T
12/15/2016 08:17:52 am

***interesting twist
*** great grammar
I've no wish.
Keep up the good work.
Hope you win.
Aoife T. ☺☺

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Liam
12/15/2016 08:43:50 am

Hi Hayley,
Once again, an amazing entry to the 100wc. I was wondering who to comment on and I saw your name, then I remembered your great story last week and I decided to try this story. I'm glad I did! Do you know what this reminds me of? It reminds me of the time I thought my teacher was an alien and she was about to attack me! I know it sounds weird, but trust me, if you saw her, you'd understand. What did the mysterious shape shifting monster do to you next? Once again,brilliant story. Bye. Liam. Mrs Boyces class.

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Tristan
12/15/2016 09:51:39 am

Hi Hayley
**great punctuation**
**great adjectives**
Well done Hayley keep up the great work

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Aaron
12/15/2016 11:37:40 pm

Hey Haley,
**great story**
**very different**

Wish:none

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Trisha
12/16/2016 12:32:08 am

Hi Hayley , Great story
*You used a lot of adjectives
I have no wishes keep it up can't wait to see your next story

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