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uthman

11/29/2016

7 Comments

 
I woke up. There was nothing to do, so I went outside to play with my friends. John asked, “Do we
want to do go down to the lake?”
I replied “Ok.”  All five of us went with him. I went back  home to grab myself an orange. After a while, we finally got there I saw a big crocodile in the wide lake. My friend was still walking behind us and he had a phobia of crocodiles. We pretended to push him in and he nearly collapsed. Within the hour, we went to the shop. I got in a bit of trouble for getting home late.
By Uthman
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7 Comments
sahil
11/29/2016 09:39:43 am

well done Uthman and very good use of the prompt! I really liked your ending and I thought it was kind of funny!
keep up the great work!!

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Evan
11/29/2016 11:18:29 am

Great story Uthman I really enjoyed it the punctuation was ten out of ten and you highlined the words with a nice bright colour and I think you have a really good chance of winning keep up the good work

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Shane
11/30/2016 08:02:23 am

Hi Uthman, great story. I like the ending of your story. Good work

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Victor
11/30/2016 09:36:09 am

Well done Uthman I like how you started with him waking up

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Connie
11/30/2016 02:17:30 pm

Hey Uthman I liked the way you highlighted the words and the punctuation was great, well done

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Ms Veale
12/4/2016 01:29:13 pm

Hi Uthman,
Another enjoyable story this week. I liked that you used the word phobia instead of just fear.
Keep up the good work
From Ms Veale

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Jack
12/5/2016 09:05:30 am

Very good story

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