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adam

11/29/2016

13 Comments

 
  Jungle walk

During the summer holidays we went on a jungle trek to the Amazon Rainforest. The footpaths were narrow and the footbridges were wide. Some of the trees and plants were the colours green and orange which were lovely vibrant colours for the place we were in. We went for a walk along this long narrow footpath which led us up to a footbridge that was old, rickety and looked as if it was ready to fall when we walked on it. Just as we were about to walk on it, it collapsed and it fell into the water below which had an evil looking crocodile within it.
Adam.
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Rhys
11/29/2016 09:02:25 am

Great story Adam great adjectives
Great vocabulary
Couldn't see any mistakes

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Lauren
11/29/2016 09:07:49 am

Hi Adam,

Your story this week is amazing you put so much effort into it and I can really tell from reading your story that your a great writer. Well done this week Adam it is such a well written piece and look forward to reading your stories in the future.

* Great adjectives and unique plot.
no wish
* Great improvement.

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Jack link
11/30/2016 12:32:28 am

Hi Adam.
Great story. I love the adjectives you used throughout your story.
What happened when you fell into the water? Did the crocodile eat you?
Well done again Adam. Perhaps you'd like to read one of my stories. Here's the link. https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/tag/jack/
Jack, Mrs. Boyce's Class, Cork.

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Tristan
11/30/2016 08:38:41 am

Hi Adam,great story it was very exciting

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Ella
11/30/2016 09:56:04 am

Wow! That was a really great story! You used good punctuation, and adjectives. Hope to see more great writing!

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Adam
12/1/2016 08:20:36 am

Helo Adam. I really enjoyed this story a lot! I wonder why the bridge fell down? What did you do when you fell in? Once again great story. Adam Mrs.Boyce's Class

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kyle
12/1/2016 09:21:29 am

Hi Adam.
amazing story.
I have never been to the amazon.
how did it the amazon look like
Kyle 5th Mrs Boyce's class

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David
12/1/2016 09:34:42 am

Hi Adam.
Great story.
Did you enjoy being in the rainforest.
Keep up the good work.
David 5th class co.Cork.

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Kasparas link
12/1/2016 10:23:16 am

Hi Adam
I really enjoyed your adventures story.
I liked the part where the foot bridge collapsed before you put your foot on it.
MRS Boyce class
kasparas

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Shane C
12/1/2016 01:38:10 pm

Hi Adam great story this week.
Would you like to go to the Amazon rainforest.
This story reminds me of the programme I'm a celebrity get me out of here. When the bridge fell must have been so scary. Please come back and visit my class blog.
Keep up the good work. Shane C 5th class Mrs. Boyce's class county Cork

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Jazzy
12/1/2016 07:54:52 pm

Hi Adam my name is jazzy and I am from a small country town in the Wheatbelt Western Australia I really your story it has great discipline language and is very well written :)

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Aivaras
12/1/2016 11:41:41 pm

Hi Adam.
Wonderful story.
I would love to go to the Amazon rainforests.
Did you really go there.
Mrs Boyce's Class
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/tag/aivaras/

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Laurynas
12/12/2016 06:42:23 am

Hi Adam
That was a really great story
I liked the way you used the words in good spaces
It reminded me of one of my friend's story that I enjoyed
It got me wondering why did you write about this
Please comment back on my story
Laurynas Mrs Boyce class

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