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pierre

9/20/2017

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                                                     Angry Scientist

One day a scientist was trying to make a light bulb. After doing a really hard work he finally he finish it. Afterwards, all he had to do was to test if the light bulb was working or not so the he so plugged in the wires  and there was a boom! And there was sparkles everywhere and he was so confused because there was rainbow colours on the the floor and they looked like gems but he was scared because there was small two guys shouting but not normal shouting they shout louder than humans and then the scientist said  “as you can see we have a situation”




     By Pierre  

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Aoife H
9/20/2017 08:43:11 am

Well done this is a very interesting story. It really made me want to read on. all I can say is to be careful with your full stops. also you added some words that didn't need to be there.
comment back on my story

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Alejandro
9/20/2017 08:43:28 am

Well done Pierre. I really liked how you used some great adjectives. But just be careful with grammar and punctuation. And watch your full stops and comma's. But well done.

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Niall
9/22/2017 05:35:35 am

Great work

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Mrs Boyce
9/22/2017 01:42:46 pm

Hi Pierre,
Well done on completing the 100 word challenge this week.
I enjoyed reading your story.
I wonder what actually happened in this lab? Did his workmates somehow shrink in the explosion?
I love your last line. I hope he can sort out this situation.
Good work this week.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland

https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/

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Nadia link
9/25/2017 09:27:47 am

Dear Pierre, thanks for commenting on my 100 Word Challenge. I really liked your story and think that you used a lot of imagination. I really liked how you ended your story and builder suspense. When I read your story I really wanted to know more. It's really interesting that we both same prompt but had totally different ideas for our blog.

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