ana

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9/20/2017

THE ACCIDENT
On december 31 Mary was travelling home with her daughter in the car to be with her family. Her daughter was rude and disrespectful to her mother. And...
BOOM!!!!
There car crashes with a truck full of colored stones and all the stones flew everywhere. Mary was startled by her daughter and the truck driver. Mary kept searching for her daughter but could not find her. Then she saw the driver of the truck very hurt and she called for help. They found the girl in a nearby store... Distraction causes much damage in the world!!!

By Ana

25 Comments

Georgia

9/20/2017 07:51:11 am

OMG ANA that was soooooo good especially for someone who is only learning English I loved your story from Georgia

Ana

9/20/2017 09:09:23 am

thank you very much georgia

Niall

9/20/2017 07:54:18 am

Great story Ana like all the adjectives keep up the great work

Ana

9/20/2017 09:10:09 am

thank you very much nial

Alejandro

9/20/2017 08:29:36 am

Well done ana, this story is brilliant. You used some great adjectives. For someone only learning English this is exceptional. In my opinion this is a story anyone our age who has spoken English there whole life would be proud of.

Ana

9/20/2017 09:10:56 am

thank you very much alejandro

Dervla

9/20/2017 08:34:44 am

Wow your story was so good for someone only in Ireland 3weeks or something it is good device for people to not go anywhere without telling there parents well done

Ana

9/20/2017 09:11:23 am

thank you very much dervla

Noah

9/20/2017 08:48:22 am

Nice story Ana I liked the way you used adjectives to make the story so much better keep it up

Ana

9/20/2017 09:11:51 am

thank you very much noah

Aoife D

9/20/2017 09:15:08 am

Great story Ana ❤️ loved it! Your really good at English writing and spelling :) keep up the good work <3

Ana

9/20/2017 09:30:17 am

Thank you aofine d

Obinna

9/20/2017 09:42:01 am

Wow, wonderful story Ana especially for someone who's still learning English. I loved the concept of your story and your punctuation was very impressive! Next time watch witch their you use the homophone was confusion I assume, but other than that unbelievable story. I also love the way you put the moral of the story at the end well done Ana.

Ana

9/20/2017 09:46:07 am

Thank you very much obinna

Obinna

9/20/2017 09:45:24 am

Please go comment on mine guys.

http://smppspower.weebly.com/100-wc-week-21/obinna

ISABEL

9/20/2017 10:01:43 am

Hola Ana soy tu mama, estoy muy contenta y orgullosa de ti. Veo que estás aprendiendo muy rápido ingles. Me encanta tu historia.

Muchos besos desde España.

Ana

9/20/2017 10:03:46 am

Muchas gracias mami😘

pierre

9/20/2017 10:17:33 am

well done Ana I liked your story and you have go English and your still learning English OMG!!!!!!!

And please go comment on mine link

http://smppspower.weebly.com/100-wc-week-21/pierre

Hubert

9/20/2017 10:25:30 am

Wow! That was an amazing story Ana or someone who only knows a bit of English that was a spectacular story some people cant write such good stories props to you. I really enjoyed that story.

Nazarij

9/20/2017 10:25:53 am

Perfect good job I am really amazed becay you only started learning English 😃😃🐰🐰

HUBERT

9/20/2017 10:29:18 am

go check out my story http://smppspower.weebly.com/100-wc-week-21/hubert#comments

Clara

9/20/2017 12:10:21 pm

Well done Ana it's hard to believe Spanish is your first language! Really well done

Colm

9/20/2017 04:34:10 pm

OMG how good are you at this? This is english not Spanish! U good at dis!

Alfie

9/22/2017 09:49:36 am

hi i like your story plz comment on my dank story at http://elderclass.weebly.com/100wc/tiny-people-rule-alfie#comments
thx ya

Mrs Boyce

9/22/2017 01:34:25 pm

Hi Ana,
Well done on completing the 100 word challenge this week.
I enjoyed reading your story.
Your last line is so true - many accidents are caused by a distraction in the car.
Good work this week.
Mrs Boyce (Team 100WC)
Cork.
Ireland

https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/

ana

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