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uthman

1/10/2017

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                       My trip to the forest

I was on my way to the forest in Cork to go camping. It was only me who was going. I did not forget to bring my navigator for my directions. I brought some food so I would not get hungry. I left my car at a car park, then I got out of my car and started my trek. I followed my navigator and at the start it informed me that I was one hour until I reached my destination. After a long while, I checked my watch and realised I had been walking for three hours. I was lost and I was at a dead end. I looked in front and behind. Which way?

By Uthman. ​
7 Comments
Rhys
1/10/2017 09:07:31 am

Nice story very creative
maybe next time use more adjectives
and nice use of the prompt and my question is which way is is it

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sahil
1/10/2017 09:08:31 am

well done Uthman really impresive story.
really nice setting.
keep it up
!!

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Connie
1/11/2017 08:45:37 am

Hi Uthman
**great story
**very interesting
Wish: maybe next time dont have so many 'I's

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Aoife
1/11/2017 08:46:04 am

***very creative***
*** great story***
wish =none

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Finn
1/11/2017 12:14:05 pm

***I loved your words I know it sounds weird but I mean your words like,informed and dead end.
***I loved your sentence openers
WISH:Try to use more adjectives.

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Jack link
1/12/2017 09:32:51 am

Hi Uthman.
Thank you for your comment on my story.
I loved your story. I hope in the end you found your way safely. I'm starting to wonder if the navigator might have sent you on a bit of a wild goose chase!
Well done again.
Jack, Mrs. Boyce's Class, Cork

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Daniel
1/12/2017 11:04:22 am

**Well done great story Uthman.
**Very creative.
**Wish:Maybe add a bit of adjectives.
Anyway great story.

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