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rose

1/10/2017

5 Comments

 
​The Never-Ending Corridor!!

My eyes blinked open. Everything was blurry. I slowly got up and stared into the gloomy darkness. Everything came into focus. I was standing in a long corridor, with lines of doors on each side. Gingerly, I opened the door to my right. I walked into another corridor; in fact, the exact same one I had just been in. What?!! I opened another door, the same thing happened, only this time, there was a door at the end of the corridor. I looked in front and behind. Which way? Suddenly, I felt faint and everything went black. I woke up lying on a metal stretcher, blinded by a bright white light.




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Rose Kelly
5 Comments
Hannah.H
1/10/2017 08:37:54 am


Hi Rose, really good story!
* Really good sentence openers!
* Also some good adjectives!
Wish: None
Overall really good well done

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Rebecca
1/10/2017 09:32:32 am

Great story Rose. I really liked it. Great adjectives and up-levelled words. I thought your story was very different to most other stories and that is what I really liked about it. I think it was very strange that every door you opened you still ended up in the same corridor. I have no wish for you because your story was EXCELLENT. Keep up the amazing work

-Rebecca

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Connie
1/11/2017 08:49:24 am

Hey Rose
**good adjectives
**very good story
Wish: none

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Liam
1/11/2017 09:22:34 am

***Super description***
***Very creative***
WISH: None
Great story Rose.

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Mrs Boyce
1/13/2017 01:17:57 pm

Hi Rose,
I enjoyed reading your story - well done!
I'm left wondering where were you?
And what next?- You'll have to write a sequel!
Super work.
Mrs Boyce
Cork.
https://mrsboycesclass.100wc.net/

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