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elliot

1/10/2017

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An ad was placed in this week’s newspaper advertising a fun family day out. It claimed to have the world’s hardest maze. I thought they were lying and so did my brother. Even so, we decided to check it out. When we got there the first thing we did was go to the maze. They were right it was challenging. Two minutes in and we were already lost. Even cheating it was still to hard. I looked in front and behind. Which way? We had to call for help because we were probably never going to get out of there. Our help came and we were saved.

By Elliot. ​
6 Comments
Aideen
1/10/2017 08:10:05 am

Hi Elliot. Good story. Your idea was cool and I liked it. Maybe next time you could put in a title for your story. I enjoyed reading your story. What happened next? From Aideen 😎😋😆

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Sean
1/11/2017 08:16:02 am

I really enjoyed this story
* that sounds like a really scary maze
*i would be trying to cheat it as well
I hope there's a part 2

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Connie
1/11/2017 08:41:23 am

Hey Elliot
**your story is really interesting
**it sounds like a scary maze
Wish:i have no wish

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Finn
1/11/2017 12:07:00 pm

Hi Elliot,
***Great creativity
***I like the way you used the prompt
WISH:none

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Liam
1/12/2017 09:11:38 am

Hi Elliot,
Your story this was very good. I like how you describe the scene. I myself would be very doubtful looking at a newspaper ad, because most of them are just scams or lies. I remember when I was 7, my family and I went to a maze at a nature park. It was quite easy because the hedges were below knee height and you could just look out to find your way, but it was good for playing catch in. Who brought you and your brother to them maze? Bye. Liam. Mrs Boyces class. Ireland

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Paul
1/12/2017 01:02:15 pm

Hi Elliot! I really enjoyed this story because of the way you used words to trap the reader in the same position as you. This story reminds me of the time I went into a hedge maze. It was a lot of fun and there was even a Pac Man board where you could put your face in the missing holes so it looks like your Pac Man. I can't believe there would be a maze SO hard! All you have to do is ride the left wall!
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