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adam

1/10/2017

8 Comments

 
                                           Christmas Holiday


It was a cool winter's day in the middle of December ,and my friend and I were looking forward to our Christmas holidays. It all we could talk about when we were in school, my teacher was beginning to get a bit fed up of listening to us talk about it all the time, so she decided to play a trick on use. Teacher asked us to go to office to get some books for her. As we walked through the hall we could hear an echo, I looked in front and behind. Which way it was coming from we didn’t know. Then we all realised that it was our teacher playing a trick on us through the intercom in the classroom.  

By Adam ​
8 Comments
Daragh
1/10/2017 08:47:29 am

Very funny story Adam you had very good punctuation

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Elizabeth
1/10/2017 10:02:13 am

Well Done!

Star: Your story was very interesting.

Wish: In one of the sentences you put a space before the comma not after.

Star: Your story was very unique.

:)

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Hannah le
1/10/2017 10:37:04 am

Hi Adam.
Your story was very creative and unique.

Star. Well done for using strong words.

Wish you could check your work and put a space before the comma.

But overall you did a fantastic job on your 100 word challenge.

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Aoife M
1/11/2017 08:23:07 am

Hi Adam,
**Great storyline
**Creative
Wish: look over your work.

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Trisha
1/11/2017 09:42:55 am

Well done Adam , great story

*Your story is very good and interesting

Wish ~ Look over your work before you submit there is a few spelling mistakes

well done!

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Anna
1/11/2017 01:00:13 pm

Hi Adam

***Creative***
***Excellent story line***

Wish= Read over your work

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Liam
1/12/2017 09:05:22 am

Hey Adam,
I love your story it is very good. Before our holidays, we weren't talking about every day like you said in your story, but we did talk about it a few times. Thats story reminds me of this morning, it was snowing and I still had to go to school (not even the worst part!) and I came insisted and nobody was around. My school is quite old so it was very scary. Were you scared when you heard the echo? Bye. Liam. Mrs Boyces class. Ireland.

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Robert
1/12/2017 12:17:15 pm

Hi Adam.
I enjoyed your story.
I liked the moment when the teacher was tricking you and your friend.
How did she trick you and your friend first?
~MRS BOYCES CLASS

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